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Monday, May 29, 2017

All children should walk to school

All children should walk to school

In H.D.S there are lots of students who don’t walk to school but some children who do walk to school. There is a common opinion that all children should walk to school. Should we believe that? I completely agree that children should walk to school and I surely have many reasons why.


Experts say that if more children walk to school the air won’t get polluted by cars. Bedford Borough council shows that walking to school makes one less car on the road reducing congestion and pollution. Overtime we have come to know that if children walk to school there will be less pollution in the air.

There is no doubt that children should walk to school because Perth Sunday Times says that children don’t get enough exercise and children should make new healthy routines. Therefore children need to walk to school.    

There is much evidence that children should walk to school because Tree hugger says that children aren’t staying outside enough and they won’t get enough fresh air. Therefore children should walk to school.

Over time we have now come to know that all children should walk to school. If children walk to school the air won’t get polluted because there is less cars on the road. Another reason is because children don’t get enough exercise so if children walk to school they will get fit . The last reason is when children walk to school they get fresh air. We can now be very, very sure that all children should walk to school.

This week we have learning to write an argument with evidence




1 comment:

  1. Angela, I like how you are able to identify persuasive language and use it effectively in your writing. - Mrs T

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